Tuesday, May 29, 2012

~Sentiments...




Sentiments begins
 when Magic of  love  grows here
and showed The way you are here
It's All Because of you here
I got Priceless Gift From Thousand Miles here
You first believed here and Waiting here
On Miracle of love here I had the Sweetest sounds here
All my life here  longing  So much love here
Unbreakable heart here and this Four letter word here
 My Undying love here even on Wave at heart here
You and I here will always be Safe and Sound...
  

It was a clear summer day, brightness on  face
     And same summer day, sign arises on race
Time to move on or  time  to wait
 Tears begun to fall and sad emotions explicit
Our moment ended  so fast, 
But your  kisses  always  last..
Another lesson learned
Experience gained
One  last word
 Other sword
Trust


32 comments:

  1. Moments of happiness can end so quickly. I guess this is why we need to be thankful for them when they come instead of taking them for granted.

    Nice poetic thoughts! :)

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    1. Hi Mara, thanks for visiting!:) I'm so thankful for all the things that come and go to my life, simply means.. I'm 'existing'..:) Thanks a lot ! Have a nice day!:)

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  2. my heart was slashed in the end..a thing which In couldn't bear experiencing it Ate..the issue of trust is a BIG word for me when it comes to love..visiting you ;)

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    1. Hello sis, :) Thanks for dropping by..:) It so true, TRUST is a big thing to consider..:) Love yah! :) God bless!:)

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    1. Hi shreya..:) Welcome to my blog!:) Thanks a lot for dropping in your one word..:) God bless you..:)

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  4. This is an interesting nesting....Linking so many poems at one place....Very creative thought!...Good work dear :)

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    1. Hi there Valli...:) Miss yah!:) Thanks a lot for coming in! Have a nice day!:)

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  5. Every time I read your work, your writing gets better and better :)

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    1. Hi Philo..:) Muaaaaahhhhhh! Thanks a lot for your comment..:) Flattering, I hope I can write more like you..:) Thanks always Philo..:) More hug!:)

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    2. More like me? Haha. You're yourself so very good. Stick to it :) Waiting to read more. hugs :)

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  6. hi linda, this poem is a sophisticated one.. very brilliantly constructed.
    i wish i can trust people more, but nowadays, such a trait is hard to come by...
    have a nice day dear. hugs hugs hugs

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    1. Hi Wan!:) thanks for visiting!:) It's easy to trust anyone, but the hard thing is choosing the right one who deserves our 101% trust, usually they taken it for granted,and that's the worst feeling we could get if we chose the wrong person..Hmmmm, but what matters most is... at least we learned that they don't deserve to be TRUSTED..

      Muaaaaaaahhhhhh!! More hug and kisses!:) Keep smiling..:)

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    1. Hello Rina, thanks a lot sis..:) Muaahhh!! Have a great day! :)

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  8. This is the most creative and best post I ever read!
    Amaze to see your poetry linked with the title of your posts! Awesome!

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    1. Hi Simran,:) Thanks a lot you find my post 'awesome'..:)I love to see you around! Thanks a lot dear for your warm comments to my post..:) God bless you! Have a nice day..:)

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  9. Well-expressed! Sentiments all put together at one place, that's really awesome. Loved your poem. :)

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    1. Hi Balqis,:) Muaaaaaahhhhhhhh!! Thanks a lot!:) God bless!:)

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  10. Hi Sagi, brilliantly done beautiful poem! I always feel you are very creative and you always try out different forms of poetry. Hope you are doing fine :)

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    1. Hi Kitty!:) Thanks a lot for visiting! I miss your blog..:) I'm good, hope you're fine too..)Keep smiling..:)

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  11. My dear friend,
    Your talent shines through on this post. Great job!!

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    1. Dear Sagittarian,
      There's still time to linkup toBlog Hop Saturday! Linky closes at 11:59pm (New York time) today Saturday. Hope you can make it. If not, still have a great weekend!

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  12. hi linda, hugs hugs and a big hug. happy friday.. great poem, i cam back to read- is soooo beautiful

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    1. Thanks a lot my dear Wan..:) Especially for the BIG HUG!! :)

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  13. hi linda, hi hi hi came back, trying to memorise your poem. ha ha ha. hugs hugs hugs .have a nice day

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  14. Thanks for sharing Sagittarian :)
    I have made my blog Pure private because of a certain reason, if you wish send me your email so that I may invite you, thank you dear friend, take care
    [danamuslimah@hotmail.com]

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  15. Beautiful SENTIMENTS, superb expression, awesome words, lovely creation. A great poem...many thanks for sharing it Saggi

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