MUDDLED LIFE
My life was like a muddled canvass
Uncertain and no warm of sunlight
Disarray in colors was always seen
Distorted collage was flowing at here
Loss and fright was painted in me
Every stroke of brush
Discomfort in me.
Light came in a bit of prayer
Invited my soul and renewed my
Faith with HIS hand I found hues that
Evaporates pain and paint my life anew into a picture-perfect sight.
An inspiration from another blogger Sui generis Writer was found
Sharing my Acrostic Poem to all.
This poetry is really challenging and I love to learn more about it. Thank you so much to all my friends who are expert in poetry for sharing us their knowledge, I really appreciate your kindness..
Thank you so much :)
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Wow! Wow! Wow! This poem is lovely...it touched my heart! I loved it....you write so well!
ReplyDeleteKeep Smiling!! :)
Loads of love xoxox
Hi! :) Thank you so much dear! :) I love to see you on top! :) Muaaahhhh:) Hope I've done this right, LOL.:)) Hugs and kisses Hisila..:) God bless you! :)
DeleteYour Welcome!!! ha...ha yess! you've done it right..LOL....hugs and kisses to you too.....Keep Smiling! :)
DeleteFirst of all, thank you very much for making me a part of this post. It is an honor to have inspired you into trying this form again.
ReplyDeleteThe poem presents such deep emotions rich with expression. Another work of art in your exquisite collection. Bravo!
Hi Sui! :) thank you so much too, it's a great honor for me to have you and be part of my post today. I know I need more practice, hehehe.. but thank you so much for encouraging, hope I've shared one today :)
DeleteGod bless you Sui ! :) Smile..:)
Hi Sui, again I would like to ask an apology to you :( I am sorry..:( I was careless that's why I got it wrong here :( Sorry friend..:( But I will try another piece to make it up to you and to this form of poetry. It was really a challenging one, hahahaha.. Thank you so much for sharing it with me..:) God bless you! :)
DeleteThis particular poem is most definitely acrostic but not double acrostic. Perhaps, I should have clarified this in my post. I will add the necessary information to my double acrostic post.
DeleteYou don’t need to apologize. I am happy enough that you tried this form and associated it with me. Trying any new form takes a bit of time and effort. Now that you are clear about this type of poetry I am sure that you’ll be able to pen it down beautifully. I hope to see your next poem soon.
I also thank Fiona for explaining this to you. I feel partly responsible for not pointing it out to you sooner. You might want to change your title to ‘My Acrostic Poem’. This’ll correct your mistake in this poem. I am sorry Sagittarian because I am rather late in clearing this out.
Hi Sui, thanks for dropping by again! :) And, sharing me the right thing to do with my post, I really appreciate it Sui..:) I will try to make a real double acrostic poem, again soon..:)) LOL
DeleteOne more thing, aside from forming backward the last letter of every line, how many paragraph should the double acrostic must have?
Thank you so much Sui! :)
The last letter does not necessarily need to be formed backwards. Most of the example I have seen have the first and the last letter same. For instance, your poem would be double acrostic when the formation is as Fiona displayed or in the way I wrote my poem.
DeleteIt can be like this:
M...m
U...u
D...d
D...d
L...l
E...e
D...d
L...l
I...i
F...f
E...e
The lines have to be such that when you read the poem, the first as well as the last letter spells out each letter of the title. Usually, in poetry the term used is not paragraph but verses or stanza. In this case, the stanzas may vary depending on the the title of your poem. There are various different ways in which poets have written double acrostic. The one that I have mentioned is based on the first as well as the last letter spelling out the title of the poem in the exact manner as it has been written. You might want to search this type of poetry on the internet for more examples to have a clear understanding. Good luck!
Also, I am very happy that you are taking it so seriously. Your dedication will definitely pay off.
Thanks again Sui! :) I've learned a lot from you and Princesa Fiona today :) Thank you so much Sui,:) Hugs and kisses :)
Delete"Loss and fright was painted in me. Every stroke of brush, discomfort in me." Whoa, that line was the star of this! (: Haha, but the whole thing really sparkled -- awesome job.
ReplyDeleteHi Cloe! :) Muaaahhh! :) thanks sweety for sharing! :) Hope you like it! LOL ..Hug for you sweety!:) Smile..:)
DeleteSo glad you found my blog and I can share in your beautiful daily words!
ReplyDeleteHello Kate! :) I'm so happy to have you here again, and grateful that I've found your blog, a wonderful blog of your yours Kate..:)
DeleteThank you so much! God bless us all..:)
Lots of emotion expressed here and done so well!
ReplyDeleteI hope life is always kind to you!
Hi there my dear Margie! :) Thank you so much for visiting! :) Muaaahhh!:) I'm happy seeing you around :) Yap, hope.. life is always kind..:) Blessed day to you!:)
DeleteI've really seen your writing *blossom* in these last two posts, sweet lady!! You really painted (no pun intended he he) such beautiful imagery for us in this one! Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteFrom what I understand, double acrostic doesn't mean two words of acrostic poetry, the 'double' part comes in to play when the last letter of each line contains letters of the same word backwards (in this case 'muddled life') or a different word completely. This is what makes it terribly challenging! I hope you don't mind me adding this knowledge. It may not be accurate but I wanted to share it anyways *smiles*
Hope you're having a day as lovely as you!
Much Love :-) ♥
Hi Princesa Fiona! :) Thank you so much for coming and sharing me additional info about double acrostic,!:) Muaaahhh!! :) You're right, the last letter must contains the letter of the same word backward, hehehe.. So, I just add it now! hahahaha.:)) Oh, sorry..:( I really need an expert to guide me, and more more more practice is a MUST for me to learn more..:) Hugs and kisses Princesa Fiona! :) *gigle* :)) Smile..:)
DeletePrincess Fiona..oh grrrrrrrrr..not this form of poetry..this is so hard uha uha uha ;(
DeleteHello ladies! ♥ ♥
DeleteOh dear, look at the raucous I've caused lol! Acrostic poetry was on my challenge list for this year but since Sui introduced this, I don't want to take that away from her PLUS quite a few of my blogging friends have already posted Acrostic poems last year.
It's still not correct, Sagittarian :((
e
f
i
l
d
e
l
d
d
u
m
this is one example of which letter should be used at the end of each line of poetry. You can't do that now, you would have to start again, so don't worry about it. Just keep it in mind for next time if there is one LoL! Also check out Sui's post again. She uses the same word but not backwards.
Signing off for the night now, ladies! Behave LoL!!!
Oh.:(( Waaaaaaahhh.. This is really hard Princesa Fiona! :)) Hahaha, I am now agree with Sie, not to have another challenge like this again!hahahaha..:)) But, it was challenging one..hmmmm, thinking, thinking..:)) Muaaaaahhh thanks a lot Princesa Fiona!:) Muaaahhh!! :)
Delete*sigh* *wide grin* :) but, behave here now...hehehe :) Goodnight Princesa Fiona..:) Muaaahhh! :)
wahhhhhhh..ok this is another form of poetry ok this is challenging ate..as per ate Fiona's info.ayayay this is hard ate..don't give Princess Fiona this idea..if she will make it a challenge I think I'll pass but I'll try *trembling*
ReplyDeleteate I will agree with them..your artistry in poetry is blossoming..though I hope everything works out well with you..are you really ok? ;)
Hi sis! :) Muaaahhh! :) Thank you so much for visiting! :) And for your flattering comment as well,:( LOL:)) Hmmmmmm, challenge from Princesa Fiona?? I know she is thinking about it now! hahaha.. You're very talented sis, and no one will disagree with me.. You're always inspiring us every time you shared one of your piece..:)
DeleteI am so happy that everything's fine now with you sis..:) About me? Do I look or sounds not okay? Hmmmmm, emote, emote...Waaaaaaaahhh:( huhuhu...:(*sigh*..shedding tears not from eyes but from nose..hehehe
Thanks a lot sis..:) Muaaaahh!! God bless you always..:) Smile..:)
naku ate Rosalinda I'll pinch you..not this form of poetry ate..shedding tears? hala you are becoming a poet also on your comments hahaha..ok a better way..aha..you have a nose bleed?..ewwwwwwww..hahaha..
ReplyDeleteHahaha, it's an itchy nose, stubborn cold, matching with tearful heart, este.. eyes! Waaahhh..LOL :))
DeleteYou're really shining now with your poetry writing, Ros. I can see your talent. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThis acrostic poem is excellent. Looking forward to read more. :))
Hi Balqis, thank you so much for your support! :) Muaaahh! :) I need more more practice ! LOL :)) Blessed evening! :)
Deletewoooooooooo..ok now I am learning ate..so it should be lines not verses ahay..so I have to cut my number of words again..sigh sie sigh hahaha..oh it has lots of forms so it can be written with the last letters backwards or the same first letters aheeeee..
ReplyDelete"Disarray in colors was always seen..Distorted collage was flowing at here"
oh now tell me ate your not good? hmp..*pout*
Hahaha, yap, you can make it both ! That's true, we're learning from our friends here, exciting isn't it? Well, gooooooo...hahhaha post now!! :))
ReplyDeleteOh, *sigh here too* :( hahaha.. No, I'm not..:) hahaha.. Muaaahh! Thanks sis!:0
opo ate exciting..hope I got it right now after editing it many times wahhhhhhh..I am just waiting for my hon's signal hahaha ;)
DeleteI am intrigue by this! This poetry challenge become a lot bigger and famous these days Sis, lol, just shame on me, I got the quest which is totally opposite, but I guess it's still related, and lol, I am a student of a course SEO...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, although this is not that perfect, I mean your poem but I am impressed with your message... for me it's still perfect :) ♥♥♥
Hi Prime, thank you so much! :) I know Prime, you're very smart and able to be a future SEO ? Thumbs up!:) Good morning! :)
DeleteAnother Best and different writing Piece....【ツ】
ReplyDelete╰☆╮There is no need of Google for me to get knowledge about new writing style and pattern because I know Your Blog is here, I will check and will know about new things╰☆╮
♡ed It...:)
Hi there ID, thank you so much for visiting! :) Hmmm, new writings style? It's all from our friends who are expert in poetry, I'm just learning from them too..:) God bless you..:)
Deletehi linda, looks like you are progressing very fast here.. from one type of poetry to another.. may be would like to learn from you, once you are an expert on this one.
ReplyDeletehave a nice day dear, hugs... bye...am waving at you too
Hi Wan, thanks for sharing! :) I hope I was really progressing, LOL I would love it if one day someone or you could learn from me! LOL Thank you so much WAn, you're such a sweet one..:) God bless you! :)
DeleteI like this one a lot both the poem and the topic. Great going dear!
ReplyDeleteHi Saru, thank you for liking this post:) It make my heart bigger this time, hehehe...:) But, I know I need more and more practice:) Thank you so much for keeping me to your company! :)
DeleteGod bless Saru.:)