~))-((~
A note
Embarked at heart
Made me dream and believe
Love from purest heart can achieve
~ ~ ))-(( amore ))-(( ~ ~
This heart was confident and calm
To find someone who's charm
Love that's certain
Not vain
~))-((~
I
know Someday
Somewhere
A certain love
Will come from a
Certain man at dream
~The Butterfly Cinquain~
This form contains 9 lines with syllable counts of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2 .
Shared us by our friend and mentor in poetry;
This form contains 9 lines with syllable counts of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2 .
Shared us by our friend and mentor in poetry;
Thank you so much...:)
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Wow! It's a very dreamy, amorous composition. It's flight of strong desire and belief of a special someone. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Sui :) Thanks for sharing comment!:) Right, strong desire! LOL.. Funny, but true..:))LOL Blessed day to you! :)
Deletelovely!!!! Wonderfully written and great cinquain! :)
ReplyDeleteOf course you'll meet the man of your dream and he'll shower his endless love! ;)
Keep Smiling!!!
Hi Hisila! :)Muaaahh!! :) Thank you for always supporting! :) Hope there is someone who's real! :)) LOL Smile..:)
DeleteBeautiful as a butterfly! Your Cinquain is so well-written. Congrats! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Balqis! :) Thanks a lot! :) I know I need more and more practice, hehehe.. Thank you because you're always here to support..:) God bless you Balqis..:) Hug and kisses..:) Smile:)
DeleteAww, wow, how beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteHi there Cloe! :) Aww!! :) Lol.. Love seeing you around! :) Thanks for coming! :) Hug for you :)
DeleteBeautiful! You did a good job, my dear! The form looks so pretty too! Nice even 'wings' ;) The image is lovely and I love the added words at the end of the post! You deserve to have your dreams come true ♥ Thank you for completing and sharing a *wonderful* Butterfly Cinquain!!!
ReplyDeleteMuch Love :) x0x
Hi Princesa Fiona, :) Muaaaaahhh! :) Thanks for always sharing us your knowledge in poetry. Your encouragement and guidance is really a big help for us.:) Thank you so much..:) *hugs and kisses* Smile :) *blink blink* :) Blessed evening! :)
DeleteBeautifully written!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteNice Cinquain if it's a Cinquain as you say.....I believe you...LOL
But I Love the composition of words, AWESOME with great feelings....:)
Hi there ID,:)) Actually I don't know if it looks like a Cinquain! :)) LOL.. Hopefully it was! :)lol Thanks a lot my friend! :) Blessed time to you! :)
Deletea very beautiful poem. thanks for sharing : )
ReplyDeleteHi demie, :) Thanks a lot for coming! :) Blessed day to you! :)
DeleteHey Sagittarian! ♥
ReplyDeleteLovely Cinquain! ^.^ keep it up . friend =)
Oh.. How are you Dana? Thank you so much for coming! :) Muaaahhhh!! Smile..:)
DeleteHello Big Sister ♥♥♥
ReplyDelete♥I am amazed, yes to the extreme! This is one of your finest entry Sis! My eyes is sparking with adoration to these two cinquain now! You are just more than creative and poetic ♥♥♥
Hi younger bro, :)thanks a lot.. And you're being exaggerated here, Ummm?? Well, thanks a ton too!! LOL :)) I know , right and left, up and down, hahaha i need more more more more practice! :) But, like what am always telling you, there's no harm in trying, if you think you can learn from it..:)LOL.. Hope I did..:) Waaaaahhh..:))
DeleteGreat day to you Prime!:)
I love reading all the different forms of poetry you and Princess Fiona post :)
ReplyDeleteIt was a lovely read, as usual. I always smile when I see your comments on SB and Prime's comments on your blog :) You're both so sweet I tell you.
Thank You so much for all your wonderful comments :)
Hi Philo,:) thank you so much for your kind words for me and Prime, you're right Prime is a younger bro and really a good person..:)
ReplyDeleteI'm happy seeing and reading your comment, I feel honored every time i got one from you,. I love your blog too because you're always sharing a great one, and you know what? because of you I found another blogger who always share us inspiration, right... Xain.. I love his poetry too, very much..:)
Thank you so much Philo..:) hug and kisses :) Keep on smiling..:)
Yes, Zain is indeed very talented :) I love his work too!
DeleteThanks a lot Philo..:) You're such a sweet gal too! :) God bless..:)
DeleteHello Sagittarian. Happy Monday!
ReplyDeletePlease excuse my lateness in visiting. This last week has been very hectic for me...at work, at home & on my blog.
There's nothing better than dreamy love.
I always marvel at how creative everyone is with these poetry forms. I think this one & the Fibonacci are my favorite because they look romantic (smile).
Nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you too for your constant visits & comments. Your support of my blog means a lot to me.
Have a great week ahead & I'm sure I'll see you again soon (smile)!
Hi Andy ! :) Oh.. LOL.. No need to ask apology,:)) You're time and effort is really appreciated here :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot! You've made me feel great with your words Andy, i know I need to learn more, from you and other great poet here..:) Thanks a lot! :)
wow!If the love is pure, then a long waiting remains unseen! :)
ReplyDeleteSO beautifully written, and so beautifully decorated!:)
Hi there Aki! :) Muaaahh!:) You're right dear "long waiting remains unseen" :( Waaaaaaaahh:(( Just kidding, ..LOL..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for visiting! :) I love seeing you around Aki! :) Hugs to you..:) Smile :)
hi Linda, am waving at you too..thanks for visiting me dear. have a lovely day.. wow wow wow SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORDS AND I WISH THE ABOVE IS A PIC OF YOU WITH THE BUTTERFLY, A VERY PRETTY LADY HUH
ReplyDeleteHi Wan! :)*blink blink* :) Thanks for dropping by! :) How I wish too Wan, that I was that lovely lady :) LOL.. Muaaahh!:) Thanks a ton dear!! :) Smile..:)
DeleteLovely words from a lovely lady!
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Margie x
Hi Margie :) Thanks a lot..:) How are you? I read your comment with Princesa Fiona, I was touched, why oh why? tears fall? Hope you're just fine my friend. Hug for you..:) Muaaaahhh! :) Keep on smiling..:)
DeleteBeautiful words. Thanks for stopping by my blog, I look forward to getting to know you better!
ReplyDeleteHi Kate :) Thanks a lot for stopping by too! :) It's a great honor for me..:) Hope I made you comfortable here, like I've felt when I visited your blog..:) Thanks a lot Kate..:) Keep on sharing! :) Gob bless you..:)
DeleteThis was a beautiful poem. I've never heard of The Butterfly Cinquain poetry style. Looks a bit more challenging than Haiku. I'll have to try it sometime and see what happens.
ReplyDelete-M. Wildflower
Hi Mara Wildflower, thanks a lot dear :) Right, it's a challenging and enjoying cinquain, I would love to read yours too :) Thanks a lot for always coming..:) It's a great honor for me..:) God bless you dear..:) Keep on smiling..:)
DeleteBeautiful. I'm always amazed at people wjo could put words together beautifully =)
ReplyDeleteHi Kristeta,:) Thanks for visiting! :) Muaaahh!! :)Hugs and kisses! :) Blessed day! :)
Deletewow ate..your words are getting deeper and hehehe..a note embarked at heart..I think I have an idea what that note is..have I seen it before on your previous post ehehehehe..ay what love in vain..nah ahh..ate you have secret hmp hmp..*hugs*
ReplyDeleteHi sis! :) LOL.. I love your sharing! :) Funny and intriguing !! LOL.. Actually...:( Hmmmm...:( Oh well, LOL:)) Just kidding!!:) Muaaahh!:) Happy to hear from you again!:) Smile..:)
DeleteThis is beautiful.. I was reading a love story just now.. This one relates to the story very much indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteHi! :) Oh, maybe the one you read is my love story??? LOL :) Just kidding!:) Thanks a lot for visiting! :) hugs..:)
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