Friday, January 27, 2012

~ Mirror Cinquain ~






Adieus
  saddening word
That we don't want to hear
 makes heart to cry and tear apart
aching
 painful
Love that we want  to keep flowing
And wanted to keep going
from you to me
Now gone.





  In life's journey,  unexpected things coming in and out.
  It doesn't mean we don't deserve the wishes we whispered before
it's just we need time for everything.
Life must go on
no matter what..






Inspiration comes from our friend Sui generis Writer This poetry was called Mirror Cinquain
This particular form of poetry comprises the syllables pattern 2-4-6-8-2 2-8-6-4-2.





Image credit: google.com, animated.com

36 comments:

  1. *CLAP* *CLAP* *CLAP*
    This is incredible. The description is so vivid that it makes me feel every bit of emotion expressed in the poem.

    I am joyfully dancing since I have made it to your post not just once but twice. *TEARY EYES*

    Thank you so much Sagittarian! ♥♥♥♥♥

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    1. Hi Sui, thank you so much for your appreciation. I owe this one to you,. My humble thanks to you Sui,for sharing me another kind of poetry. May God continue to bless you and your heart my friend..:)

      Again, thank you so much!:) Keep smiling:)

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  2. weeeeeeeeee..so emotional ate..you have penned it beautifully but ate the pix should be a woman unless if this poem is not specifically for you hehehe..I have done my double acrostic poem ate and thank you to your friend Sui and Ms.Fiona for teaching us..ate seriously you have written it so well *blink blink*..but the ending was an ouch ouch..

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    1. Hi sis, thanks for coming! And for sharing comment!:) I would love to read your double acrostic now! Right, thanks to our friend Sui and our mentor Ms. Fiona for sharing us their knowledge in poetry.:)

      Well, i choose the pix of a man because mostly those who are being left are man, waahhhh.. Just kidding,:)) just to hide something ..hehehe galing mo sis, tago ko na nga eh para di halata,..lol

      Thanks a lot!:)muaaaaahhhhh!:) Smile..:)

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    2. hahaha..ate can you have a google translator please..hmp so your hiding something ha..I can feel it through the way you write eh..joke lang po ;)

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    3. hahaha..Well, i love your blog sis!:) So romantic! I can feel it!!:) Happy for you my sis..:) Keep it up! :) Muaaaahhh!:) Hugs..:) Translator? hahaha,I'll just send it to your mail..hahaha

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  3. I always look forward to read your work.. :)
    Life must go on.. :)

    I have something for you on my blog!

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    1. Hi Philo, thanks a lot for coming! Especially for the award that you shared..:) It's a great honor to be chosen as one of your recipients. Thank you so much..:) I love it!!:)

      Keep smiling dear! :) God bless you always! :)

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  4. Ohh, I LOVE it! I could sense and feel every emotion of this poem!

    I've been practicing that Butterfly Cinquain style of poetry for the past couple of days. It's been an interesting experience. Now, I'll add this Mirror Cinquain to my collection.

    I think I need to make a poetry blog, but I don't know . . .

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    1. Hi Mara, thanks for liking it,:) I would love to read your poetry too Mara! It's true, writing poetry is very interesting, thanks to our friends from here who never get tired in sharing their talent:)

      Thanks a lot Mara! :) Muaaaahh! :) Smile..:) Blessed day to you! :)

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  5. The unexpected things need time to adjust themselves, or perhaps, we need time to adjust ourselves. There are some moments, so bitter in taste that we just forget about the upcoming sweet moments! For the sake of those sweet moments, we have to live! :)
    Very nice poem friend! :)

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    1. Right Aki! We have to live for the sake of sweet moments..:) Time will help us,:) Muaaaaahhh! I love your latest post ! Very inspiring! :) Hmmmm... Thanks sweety! :) smile..:)

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  6. Your feeling are "mirrored" in this poem. There's a sad tone in your voice but that's how to let it go and start afresh. Yes, life has to go on. :)

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  7. Hi Balqis, thanks for coming!:) Right, life must go on!:)Smile..:)

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  8. I loved this Mirror Cinquain, Sagittarian! You did a great job and it *touched* my emotions! I don't know what Ms. Sie is babbling on about, but I think the picture is perfect for this one :P and so is the color of the font.

    A writer doesn't always write about themselves. Taking on different characters and scenarios that may be unfamiliar to us is what makes us good writers, so bravo to you, sweetie! Your talent is growing with every piece you write!

    ♥ Have a wonderful weekend! ♥

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    1. Hi Princesa Fiona, :) Thank you so much for loving it, :) I've learned a lot from you and other friends of ours here. Writing in form of poetry is the best way to share our emotions, and I really love it and keep on loving it everyday.And I owe this precious gift from all of you who keep on inspiring us.

      Thank you so much Princesa Fiona,:) God bless you always.:)

      *Hugs and kisses* Keep on smiling :)

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  9. P.S. ~ Sorry I missed this earlier in my reader. Glad I scrolled way back to catch it before going to bed :-)

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    1. OH, LOL.. No need to say sorry Princesa Fiona, :) Muaaahhh! :)Love yah!! :)

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  10. Hello Sagittarian. How are you?
    People come & go from our lives all the time, but not love...love remains eternal. This is lovely...sad, but beautifully expressed.
    I agree 100% with what Princesa Fiona said too.
    Nice background music! ;-)
    Thanks for sharing & visiting.

    Today is a day of celebration for me...it's my 1st Blogoversary!
    Please come to my blog to see. The post is a little longer than usual, but you have to read it all the way through to get the true essence of it. I have a special gift for you too. I hope you will honor me by accepting it (smile).
    Special Celebration (Part.2): It's My Blogoversary!

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    1. Hi Andy, thank you so much for visiting!! I just came from your blog and I'm surprised, oh.. you've touched my heart when I read your post and message for all your friends Andy, you're heart was showing in every words you've penned.

      Congratulations again, for celebrating 10th year anniversary of your marriage, and your 1st year in blogging!:) Keep it up, looking forward to read more from you! :)

      BTW, I would love it if I can post the gift animated here :) Thanks a lot Andy! ) God bless you!:)

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    2. My dear Sagittarian,
      Thank you for these kind words.
      You've been very loyal to my blog & if it weren't for the support of readers like you, my blog would not have reached as far as it has, so my Bloversary was really a double celebration...1 year & also a celebration of you (smile). I too am looking forward to many more years of friendship & interaction with you.

      Thank you for accepting the Award. I have just responded to your email so you can get it to animate.

      Thanks again.

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    1. Hi there, thank you so much for taking time to read,:) It's a great honor for me.:) Hope to see you always! God bless you dear :) Smile..:)

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  12. Nice one...little bit emotional......:)
    keep sharing...:)

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    1. Hi ID! :) Thank you so much! :) Smile..:)

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    1. Hi there Dana!:) Thanks a lot for visiting!:) Smile.:)

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  14. Wow Wow and Wow.....Such beautiful words!! Wonderfuuly written!!
    How are you? Hope you're fine....Take Care!
    Keep Smiling!! :)

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    1. Hi Hisila! :) Thanks a lot sweety! :) Yap!:) I'm fine..:) Thank you for always visiting! :)

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  15. Hi, Dang, its a very nice post, that acquaints us with the truth of life that ' love is the sobriquet of pain'. Keep writing.

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    1. Hi Sam!:) Thank for visiting! :) And always there to support! :) God bless you always! :) Smile for you..:)

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  16. @Sagittarian before realizing what u meant there... just i felt its a feeling from true heart.... its so pure tats it i can say.. i cant just see it as a poem but an inner feeling that banded you from the times... goood

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    1. Hi kalyan! :) Welcome to my blog! :) Thanks for your appreciation, :) Looking forward to hear from you again! :) God bless you..:) Smile..:)

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  17. Oh, this one is really something! (: "From you to me. Now gone." -- Such a powerful way to close the poem; it got right to the point, and I loved that.

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    1. Hiyo!!:) How are you Sweety? Muaaaahh! Thanks for liking it! And always sharing commment!:) *sigh*:) smile...:) God bless you sweety!:)

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  18. Hiyo!!How are you Sweety? Thanks for always visiting! :) Muaaahh!! Thanks for liking it! :) *sigh*:) hugs:) Smile..:)

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