Friday, February 3, 2012

~My Nonet Attempt...







  My   apology,   this   past    few   days 
Feeling alone down  in the dumps
 Nowhere  to  go, all  were blank
  I'm glad, "time" gives a knock
   And  whispered  me  luck
   Thanks for the glance
  Shows a chance
 (I'm back)
(Now)
*~~O~~O~~* (         )*~~O~~O~~*
( A)
(Bubble)
 Popped in mind
On   top I   climbed
 Days  and  lonely nights
That  couldn't   even  sight
If  it's  someone or somewhere
I know I'm on cloud nine this time
  Sign  of  blissful and new hope in mine
 
~Nonet~

Another inspiration from our very own,  



The Princess Passions - Princesa Fiona

This form is what we called "NONET" 
With syllables counts of 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2 &1 
and reverse syllables counts on the second half. 
Can be form in standard, reverse and also flip form 
to make it an hour figure glass like what I did.

Thank you so much for sharing us another challenging and enjoyable form of poetry!










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33 comments:

  1. Today is a "nonetic" day. First Fiona, then MarieHarmony and now you.
    You have done an excellent job with this. The form is very shapely. I was going to attempt the hourglass form of nonet as well but I am late! Nevermind, I am very happy to see you try this poetry. Splendid it really is. I can vividly see your thoughts. Just like an hourglass, the negative thoughts disappaered in the first half and positive approach filled the other part. I can clearly imagine the movement of sand falling in a wordly fashion. What more can I say? You are I*N*C*R*E*D*I*B*L*E!

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    1. Hi Sui! :) Thanks for your nice comment, it's a great honoured for me! And I owe this to Miss Fiona and ofcoures from you, for sharing us different form of poetry too. I really love to learn more.. Thank you so much..:)

      God bless you always..:)

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    1. Hi Dana, thanks for visiting!:) Blessed day! :)

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  3. WoW! The first post for me to read from a participant of the Nonet Challenge! I'm thrilled to see that you chose the 'hour glass' form and it's presented beautifully!

    Now to comment on the contents of the poem ~ you managed to weave a heartfelt picture of the last two days of your life and end it on a positive note! I'm SO impressed and the image is gorgeous! Congratulations! I really enjoyed every aspect of this one!

    Thanks so much for your participation, sweetheart!
    Much Love :-) ♥

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    1. Thank you so much Princesa Fiona! :) You're sharing and encouraging, inspired us to try this form.:) Thanks for always giving us your full support,.:) Muaaahh!! :) Hug and kisses..:)

      May God bless you always Princesa Fiona..:)

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  4. Impressive! And beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words.

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    1. Hello Kate! :) thank you for dropping by! :) God bless!:)

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  5. ahay ate an hour glass hehehe..fits your words with it..we all go through this emotional moods in our lives but it can heal with time..that's the spirit ate sadness and tears may flow but moments after let us learn to have a positive mind..weeeeee..hope always gives us a chance to cope..nice message ate ;)

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    1. Hi Sie, thanks for sharing! Muaaaahhhh!!! I agree with you! :) And I love your Nonet too, Always!:) God bless! :)

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  6. Its incredible my friend!
    Even i have tried writing nonets, but i am unable to bring that beauty, which you have successfully poured in your poem!
    this is a very lovely post! For me, the arrangement of words at right place is a very big deal, but you did it so proficiently! Loved it friend!
    Hugs and kisses....

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    1. Hmmmmm....:) Thanks a lot Aki! You're great too! :) And i love your recent post, so heart warming..:) Muaaaaahh!! :) God bless you always! :)

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  7. Excellent creation, dear Dang. You got so many gems hidden in your sac of thought. Lovely. Keep it up.

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    1. Hi Sam,:) Thanks a bunch!!!:) I just hope, I really have atleast one of those what you said..LOL

      God bless you Sam..:)

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  8. Congrats for this excellent poetry! You've done it. I'm still looking for suitable topic. Glad that we're in the Nonet mood! :)

    I love the shape. :)

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    1. Right Balqis, thanks to Princesa Fiona for inspiring us all..:) Thank you so much for visiting! :) Muaaaaaaahhhh!!! :) God bless you always! :)

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  9. I got lots of information by your post. Everything define in this post very beautiful way. You should continue do this type of post.

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  10. My dear Sagittarian,
    Firstly, let me apologize for my lateness in stopping by. I have a backlog of visits to make/comments to respond to, which seems to grow by the day.

    WoW! I'm so glad with a little time you got your mojo back! (LOL)
    Love the creativity of the hourglass...wish I were that talented.
    Keep up the good work!
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

    Thanks also for accepting the Award. Isn't the animation GREAT! (smile). I am honored to have such faithful friends as you. Am looking forward to many more wonderful years of sharing, encouraging & inspiring.

    Have a wonderful weekend & see you soon!

    Kingship Of Love

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    1. Hi Andy, thanks a lot! Yap the animation was "GREAT"! I love it! :) Like what I always tell you, i love your writing so much, it gives me another inspiration.

      I always love to follow every post you have..:) Keep sharing more Andy! :) God bless you!

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  11. I loved your Nonet! The first part of it was sad though. I'm glad you're feeling better.

    Please come check-out my new blog! :)

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    1. Hi Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot!!:)

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  12. Thank you for sharing this poetry. Great!

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    1. Hi! Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot! :) Hope to hear from you again!:)

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  13. Yipppeee!!! You've done a beautiful job with this nonet challenge! I loved it! I tried to write one but couldn't :( But I'm still trying! he..he
    The picture is beautiful too! WELL DONE! <3
    Cheers!!
    Keep Smiling :)

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    1. Hi Hisila! Thanks a bunch!! :) Muaaaahhhh!:)

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  14. the mood of the clouds has to change according to the seasons... welcome again with cheers and happiness :)

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  15. hope is the only weapon that brings our time back... you have that... nice to see you again with cheers and happiness.. have a nice day keep smiling :)

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    1. Yes, it's hope that keeps us holding tight and stand firm.. Thanks a lot for always sharing, I really appreciate your visit.:) God bless you always Kalyan..:)

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  16. I like this post. Everything designs in nice way I got much information by this post. You should continue do this type of post.

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..I would love to hear from you..:)