Wednesday, April 25, 2012

~ You and I..





The first time our eyes met
Isn’t an accident
And I didn't expect
 Feeling would be this perfect.


Words are easy to amend
Hope this feeling last till the end
You might not believe
I just can’t let you leave.


They say you can’t be mine
Not now, but on the right time
You and I together as one
And it would be perfectly done.




Let's feel the love that God has given us.. 



28 comments:

  1. What a love filled poem. You come up with such cute and lovable poems. Together with the music, this post created the perfect imagery.
    Very sweet and lovely post Sagittarian.

    I wonder how you can always come up with such charming, sugary sweet poems.
    Loved reading it. ✰♡✰
    Love ya! ❤

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    1. Hi Sui, thanks a lot..) I loved to share anything that comes up with my mind,:) Especially love,this is where I wanted to live forever..hehehe..:)

      Thanks a lot Sweety, :) Keep smiling..:)

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  2. The photo you've chosen for this poem is adorable!

    I always enjoy your love poems. I am glad that you are not too afraid to share them with the public. I write love poems too, but I don't dare let anyone see them, ha, ha! :)

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    1. Hi Mara, thank you so much for sharing comments too..:) I really love sharing,..:) I hope one day I can able to read one of your love poems too..:)

      Thanks Mara!:) Keep smiling..:)

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    1. Hi Ruchi, :) Thanks a lot!:) Welcome to my blog!:) Hope to hear from you again..:) God bless Sweety..:)

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  4. Lovely, lovely!

    Anna :o]

    (Music is perfect for your poem too.)

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  5. hi linda, such a beautiful piece of poetry..
    you make me feel very emotional already, cos right now my love is very far away..sob sob, have a nice day

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    1. Hi Wan,:) Thanks a lot for your nice and such sweet comment..:) I can relate with you my friend.. :) Let's just hug..hmmmm our favorite pillow,:)) When you want to say something to your loved one who is far from you, they say utter the words to wind and will sent it to your honey bunch..:)

      Thanks a lot ..:) Keep smiling..:)

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  6. Actually it is more like a song than a poem and I enjoyed reading it...

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    1. Thank you so much Saru..:) Have a wonderful day!:)

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  7. Its so nicely written...........very simple, but wonderful work! :)

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    1. Hi!!:) Thanks a million to you!:) Have a nice day!:)

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  8. Nice place for me to relax and think other than my profession.I deal with pain ,misery and sufferings,but still love my work.Medicine can't treat everything,but love and care can make things easier.Thanks for sharing,would come here again to relax.

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    1. Hi there Yunis..:) It's my pleasure.:) And thank you so much for liking my post and seeing it relaxing, your comment is very valuable for me. Hope all is well with you,) Have a nice day..:)

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  9. love love..Ate in love ka noh..I can relat to every word hehehe..visiting you po ;)

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    1. Hi Nicole Marie,..:) Thanks for dropping by..:) Have a nice day!:)

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  11. This was lovely :) I love the song too..

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    1. Hi Philo,:) Thanks a lot!:)More hug and kisses my sweet friend..:)

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  12. hi linda, read your reply, how sweet..wish it works. ha ha
    Now, i am wondering what happen to you. you have not updated your post nor come and visit me. It is not that i insist you come, but i am worried about your silence..you are always so cheerful, never silent.. Are you in good health? Or are you having problems.. wish i can be of help.
    should you need someone to listen to you, email me, i willingly share your story and be a good listener/ take care linda. have a great weekend

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    1. Hi Wan,:) Muaaahh!!! Thanks a million to you my dear friend..:) You're so sweet..:) Hug you more and more..:) I am good, thank you..:) Thank you..:) Thank you..:) ...muaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!:)

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  13. This poem is really filled with feeling of love. Very beautifully written! Love it. :)

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    1. Hi Balqis, thanks for visiting..:) It's always a pleasure for me to have comment from you.:) Thanks a lot..:)

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    1. Hi there Asma Khan, thanks for dropping by..:) I will visit yours too..:) Have a wonderful day!:)

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