Jangled mind in acrostic?
Febricity might comes in over trying,
Marvelous feeling when improving.
Apropos remarks sometimes coming,
Maybe because of some conflicting words.
Junks probably not, but a priceless piece and
Juleps in mind when inspirations come.
Auger tool can consider it,
Separating mind and heart in poetry won't help.
Octave will flow perfect, when written with emotion.
Novice is what I am, when it comes in writing but
Decided to continue learning more in poetry.
~"Calendar Acrostic"~
Another form of acrostic poetry
Inspired us by our very own
Each line begins with a word that has
first three letters same as the first three
letters in the names of every month.
Images credit: google.com, whynotgif.com
You DID it! Well Done! *CLAPS*
ReplyDeleteLooks like you learnt some words from my poem. Haha. I have added words to readers' vocabulary.
Is what I read your explanation of the turmoil you had to go through while trying out these poetic forms? Poor you! But you didn't give up. Your last line, especially makes me happy.
♥❀♥Decided to continue learning more in poetry♥❀♥
I am happy for you and myself as well. Feels great when I impart something valuable. *THUMBS UP TO YOU*
Hi sui! :) thanks for liking it even though it's true "turmoil" is what I got,hahaha.. But, it helps!! hahaha, It encourage me to try and try! I won't say it's easy, but I love the feeling of having turmoil sometimes,hehehe as long as I can learn out of it! :)
DeleteAnd it's true, you've shared us words unfamiliar and it enhance our words vocabulary, thank you Sui..:) Because of only few words can be use, I don't have choice but to use some of your chosen words too, just to complete the sentence. I'm sorry..:(
Like what I've said, with turmoil or not, still my decision is continue to learn..:) And thanks for sharing another interesting Sui! :) You're great!!:)
God bless you and your heart because you also love sharing..:) Keep smiling..:)
Nice one Rose! Its a story of poetry life! very nice! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Aki!:) Lol... I got 2 from you! Wow, great! muaaaahhh!!! Thank you sweety!:)
DeleteLovely!!! How did you write it? OMG its beautiful! My friend you have introduced me to another form of writing! Wooohhoooo!! I loved it! I wish I could write like that! :)
ReplyDeleteKeep Smiling!
Loads of Love <3
Cheers!!!!
Thank you so much Hisila!:) Muaaaahhh!!! I know you have the talent and you can do better than this! :) That's for sure..:) Keep smiling sweety! :)
Deletehehehe..Ate Rosalinda did it too..those are unfamiliar words too can you install a vocabulary widget too ate..my mind is blowing boom hehehe..joke joke Ate..all I can say every written piece from us is an achievement because we are learning and I am happy you feel the same way too Ate..as what you said "junks probably not, but a priceless piece"..you're so right because for me it is an achievement finishing one *blink blink*..I'm proud of you ;)
ReplyDeleteHi sis! :) Muaaaahh!! Thanks for sharing and, hmmmmm:) Well, it so true, maybe not that good, but happiness is here after I got sick in thinking and trying to create one,hehehe.
DeleteAnd it's true, learning from trying is really an achievement,. Recognition is not what we want, but to learn without any cost is a great reward.:)
Thanks to all our friends here who keep sharing and encouraging us to learn more. I'm so proud that I've met all of you through blogging! :) Muaaaaahhhh!!! *blink blink*
Hello Sis, I miss your blogs a lot, and I pick this as I saw this one at my FB wall... this is so marvelous, and this challenge is not that easy for sure but you are at your best as always! I am happy for you Sis!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Prime!!! :) And we miss you too! :) Hope everything's fine there! :) God bless Prime..:)
DeleteHey Well done!! Very artistic ^.^
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Dana! :) Muaaahhh!!! Keep smiling..:)
DeleteWow! How did you do this? I'm very impressed. I think I'm too afraid to try a Calendar Acrostic.
ReplyDeleteWonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful. :)
Thanks a ton Madame! :) It's a great feeling that I have you here again, thank you,thank you, thank you so much...:) And i love your blog too, it's so inspiring and I love your poetry too..:) God bless you always!:)
DeleteI thought Sui invented the "Calendar Acrostic" but I just Googled it and saw another example he he. Good for you, Sagittarian! I especially loved the last four lines ~ awesome :-) ♥ The colors of the post are gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteMuaaaahhhh!! :) Thanks a bunch Princesa Fiona for liking it although it was not that good..:) I'm happy and so much happy everytime I learn new things..:)
DeleteThank you so much Princesa Fiona :) Muaaaaaaaaahhh! Smile..:)
This is great! Very well done. I like your creativity with words. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Balqis! :) Muaaahhhhh! Happy Sunday! :)
DeleteNice....i tried commenting before, bt dere was sm prob! :) A very good work Rose:)
ReplyDeleteThanks you did it here now! LOL..:)) Thank you so much for visiting Aki! :)
DeleteBrilliant work :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Philo! :)
DeleteWith every post you soar higher and higher in the realm of literature. I love to stare at you with my head turned up and clap simultaneously.
ReplyDeleteHmmmm...:) Thanks a lot Sam..:) Happy to hear from you again..:) Takecare friend..:) God bless you..:)
ReplyDeleteI must say unbelievable poetry presented by you. I never knew that each line of poetry could begin with the calendar months. Fabulous and fascinating!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Elvirah for visiting and sharing comment! :)It was a great feeling..:) Thank you so much! :) God bless you always! :)
Deletethats really lovely! never read something like this before!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot demie!:) Have a wonderful day! :)
DeleteWow, how beautiful and creative. :) Thank you for sharing this with everyone, you lovely Rose! Haha, wow, this must have took a lot of effort to make; this is really something.
ReplyDeleteMuaaahhh! Hi Sweety! :) Thanks for coming and sharing! :) Nice to hear from you again..:)*blink blink* :)
DeleteVery well done Sagi ! You're amazingly creative ...Thumbs up ! :))
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kitty! Muaaaaaahhhhhhhh! :) God bless! :)
ReplyDeletevery nice poems i like it u have written every months with words funtastic thing
ReplyDeleteThank you mskshares! :) Wonderful time to you!:)
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