My apology, this past few days
Feeling alone down in the dumps
Nowhere to go, all were blank
I'm glad, "time" gives a knock
And whispered me luck
Thanks for the glance
Shows a chance
(I'm back)
(Now)
*~~O~~O~~* ( )*~~O~~O~~*
( A)
(Bubble)
Popped in mind
On top I climbed
I'm glad, "time" gives a knock
And whispered me luck
Thanks for the glance
Shows a chance
(I'm back)
(Now)
*~~O~~O~~* ( )*~~O~~O~~*
( A)
(Bubble)
Popped in mind
On top I climbed
Days and lonely nights
That couldn't even sight
If it's someone or somewhere
I know I'm on cloud nine this time
Sign of blissful and new hope in mine
~Nonet~
Another inspiration from our very own,
The Princess Passions - Princesa Fiona
This form is what we called "NONET"
With syllables counts of 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2 &1
With syllables counts of 9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2 &1
and reverse syllables counts on the second half.
Can be form in standard, reverse and also flip form
to make it an hour figure glass like what I did.
Can be form in standard, reverse and also flip form
to make it an hour figure glass like what I did.
Thank you so much for sharing us another challenging and enjoyable form of poetry!
Image credit:mobileapple.com
Today is a "nonetic" day. First Fiona, then MarieHarmony and now you.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an excellent job with this. The form is very shapely. I was going to attempt the hourglass form of nonet as well but I am late! Nevermind, I am very happy to see you try this poetry. Splendid it really is. I can vividly see your thoughts. Just like an hourglass, the negative thoughts disappaered in the first half and positive approach filled the other part. I can clearly imagine the movement of sand falling in a wordly fashion. What more can I say? You are I*N*C*R*E*D*I*B*L*E!
Hi Sui! :) Thanks for your nice comment, it's a great honoured for me! And I owe this to Miss Fiona and ofcoures from you, for sharing us different form of poetry too. I really love to learn more.. Thank you so much..:)
DeleteGod bless you always..:)
great job =)! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Dana, thanks for visiting!:) Blessed day! :)
DeleteWoW! The first post for me to read from a participant of the Nonet Challenge! I'm thrilled to see that you chose the 'hour glass' form and it's presented beautifully!
ReplyDeleteNow to comment on the contents of the poem ~ you managed to weave a heartfelt picture of the last two days of your life and end it on a positive note! I'm SO impressed and the image is gorgeous! Congratulations! I really enjoyed every aspect of this one!
Thanks so much for your participation, sweetheart!
Much Love :-) ♥
Thank you so much Princesa Fiona! :) You're sharing and encouraging, inspired us to try this form.:) Thanks for always giving us your full support,.:) Muaaahh!! :) Hug and kisses..:)
DeleteMay God bless you always Princesa Fiona..:)
Impressive! And beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words.
ReplyDeleteHello Kate! :) thank you for dropping by! :) God bless!:)
Deleteahay ate an hour glass hehehe..fits your words with it..we all go through this emotional moods in our lives but it can heal with time..that's the spirit ate sadness and tears may flow but moments after let us learn to have a positive mind..weeeeee..hope always gives us a chance to cope..nice message ate ;)
ReplyDeleteHi Sie, thanks for sharing! Muaaaahhhh!!! I agree with you! :) And I love your Nonet too, Always!:) God bless! :)
DeleteIts incredible my friend!
ReplyDeleteEven i have tried writing nonets, but i am unable to bring that beauty, which you have successfully poured in your poem!
this is a very lovely post! For me, the arrangement of words at right place is a very big deal, but you did it so proficiently! Loved it friend!
Hugs and kisses....
Hmmmmm....:) Thanks a lot Aki! You're great too! :) And i love your recent post, so heart warming..:) Muaaaaahh!! :) God bless you always! :)
DeleteExcellent creation, dear Dang. You got so many gems hidden in your sac of thought. Lovely. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Sam,:) Thanks a bunch!!!:) I just hope, I really have atleast one of those what you said..LOL
DeleteGod bless you Sam..:)
Congrats for this excellent poetry! You've done it. I'm still looking for suitable topic. Glad that we're in the Nonet mood! :)
ReplyDeleteI love the shape. :)
Right Balqis, thanks to Princesa Fiona for inspiring us all..:) Thank you so much for visiting! :) Muaaaaaaahhhh!!! :) God bless you always! :)
DeleteI got lots of information by your post. Everything define in this post very beautiful way. You should continue do this type of post.
ReplyDeleteHi! Welcome to my blog! Thanks for visiting and sharing comments!! :)
DeleteAwesome :)
DeleteThanks izdiher! :)
DeleteMy dear Sagittarian,
ReplyDeleteFirstly, let me apologize for my lateness in stopping by. I have a backlog of visits to make/comments to respond to, which seems to grow by the day.
WoW! I'm so glad with a little time you got your mojo back! (LOL)
Love the creativity of the hourglass...wish I were that talented.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Thanks also for accepting the Award. Isn't the animation GREAT! (smile). I am honored to have such faithful friends as you. Am looking forward to many more wonderful years of sharing, encouraging & inspiring.
Have a wonderful weekend & see you soon!
Kingship Of Love
Hi Andy, thanks a lot! Yap the animation was "GREAT"! I love it! :) Like what I always tell you, i love your writing so much, it gives me another inspiration.
DeleteI always love to follow every post you have..:) Keep sharing more Andy! :) God bless you!
I loved your Nonet! The first part of it was sad though. I'm glad you're feeling better.
ReplyDeletePlease come check-out my new blog! :)
Hi Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot!!:)
DeleteThank you for sharing this poetry. Great!
ReplyDeleteHi! Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot! :) Hope to hear from you again!:)
DeleteYipppeee!!! You've done a beautiful job with this nonet challenge! I loved it! I tried to write one but couldn't :( But I'm still trying! he..he
ReplyDeleteThe picture is beautiful too! WELL DONE! <3
Cheers!!
Keep Smiling :)
Hi Hisila! Thanks a bunch!! :) Muaaaahhhh!:)
Deletethe mood of the clouds has to change according to the seasons... welcome again with cheers and happiness :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kalyan...:)
Deletehope is the only weapon that brings our time back... you have that... nice to see you again with cheers and happiness.. have a nice day keep smiling :)
ReplyDeleteYes, it's hope that keeps us holding tight and stand firm.. Thanks a lot for always sharing, I really appreciate your visit.:) God bless you always Kalyan..:)
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