Tuesday, February 7, 2012

~ Endlessly ~ Triple Acrostic







                    Entwine my heart don't set it free   
                    Nights with hell now no vain
                    Divine words keeps me hold
                    Limitless love was fall
                    Emotions arises surprise
                    Showered lips with kisses
                    Soul and body is wearing happiness
                    Loving you tenderly is so wonderful
                    You cuddled me tight with  heart.. Endlessly


" Loving is living endlessly "



~Triple Acrostic~
My first attempt to create Triple Acrostic.
The word "ENDLESSLY" was written vertically at first and last letter 
and the middle was reverse.
No intention to change form of Triple acrostic, I  tried to reverse the middle word to see the difference, and to add some creativity.  
Triple acrostic can be written in any form as long as the first, middle and the last letter must form a word or phrase shows the acrostic form, it can be read all vertically  like ~*Sui generis Writer*~ or
reverse it at the end like ~*Princesa Fiona*~

This another interesting form of poetry was introduced by our dear friends
I would like to take this opportunity to share my deepest thanks to both of you.. 
It's true that from
"sharing we are learning"..






Images credit: google.com, desicomments.com


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28 comments:

  1. ParmitaFebruary 7, 2012 at 3:29 PM

    Well done! Another achievement of yours. I am happy that you a trying various forms of acrostic and doing a wonderful job with all of them.

    Have a nice, lovable day! :)

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 7, 2012 at 9:43 PM

      Thanks a lot Sui! :) I'm just trying, but I know I need more time and more practice, to create one great acrostic.

      Thanks for visiting! :) God bless !:)

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  2. Balqis DBJFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    I agree with Sui. This is really nice! I love the way you wrote it and how "Endlessly" appeared 3 times in the stanza. A challenging task but you've proven that you could write well. :)

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 7, 2012 at 9:47 PM

      Thank you so much Balqis! :) You know what? I love yah!!! :) You're so kind to me,and I really appreciate it Balqis..:) I'm lucky to have you as a great friend..:) Thank you..:) God bless you..:)

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  3. ✿Sie✿February 7, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Love love love.."entwine my heart don't set it free"..a perfect line just in time for valentines day ｡◕‿◕｡

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 7, 2012 at 9:54 PM

      Thanks sis! Yeah, love, love love...:)) hehehe..muaaaahhh!! Can you teachme how to doughie?? nge!hehehe,. how do write that too??? hmmm..:

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  4. KittyFebruary 7, 2012 at 8:53 PM

    As I always say and believe, you a very creative person..you try various forms and it turns out beautifully. Very challenging job you've done very nicely !:)
    keep it up dear..hugs ! :))

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 7, 2012 at 9:57 PM

      Thank you so much Kitty..:)Actually, I'm just trying and I really love to learn more..:) I owe this to our friends here who always shared their passion in writing. Thank you so much Kitty! Miss your blog too! :) Muaaahh! Have a nice day! :)

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  5. KalyanFebruary 7, 2012 at 10:56 PM

    @sagittarian yes love is endless... what is said is absolutely lovely .. the feeling of a tender love is indescribable like the feel you packed in your words... and again want to tell you the meaning for my poem

    meaning is

    i can live without smiles of a baby
    i can cheat my eyes without showing the day light
    i can convince my heart for the lost love
    but i cant live without friendship
    i may be selfish or its my need but
    its a boon from god..
    it should be unpacked soon...

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 6:27 AM

      Thanks a lot kalyan!:) Your comment was really appreciated here..:) And I love your poem about friendship too! :) God bless you ..:) Blessed day! :)

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Oh Dear,
    You are a genius! You've written so well! WONDERFUL..... :)
    I loved it! The picture is also so nice...OMG I am in love with that picture! Truly......and the title is so good! THUMBS UP!

    Loads of Lovexoxox
    Keep Smiling :)

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 6:32 AM

      Hi....*waving hand* :) Thanks a lot Hisila! :) Muaaaaaaahhhhhhh!! I'm so happy 'coz you love this post and the image here. Hmmmm... How about your Valentine's Day? Any unique way to share about how to celebrate it?? Want to hear your sweet way too my dear..:)

      Muaaaaahhhhhhh!! Hugs and kisses:) *blink blink* :)

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  7. --February 7, 2012 at 11:48 PM

    Yay! You did it ~ Bravo!! I love how you included the quote at the end! Kudos to you for being creative AND how SWEET of you to mention me in this post! You are way too kind ~ thanks so much! I feel like Hisila, I'm in love with the image too! STUNNING!

    Much Love :-) x0x

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 6:40 AM

      Muaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!! Thanks a lot!:) I'm happy that you find it creative too Princesa Fiona..:) Hugs and kisses...:) I'm learning because of you and other friend, I'm really happy that I've met you here..:) Thank you so much Princesa Fiona..:)muahhhh!! :)*blink blink* waving hand*:)

      I was thinking how does the picture will look like, if it was me who's up there?? Weeeeehhh,hahahaha....Just kidding..hahaha

      Blessed evening Princesa Fiona..:)

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  8. cookingvarietiesFebruary 8, 2012 at 12:59 AM

    Hi linda, wow ! you are an expert already, not easy to do this Acrostic style…. Beautifully written piece. Have a nice day

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 6:43 AM

      Thanks a bunch! A kisses for you!:) muaaaaaahhhh, muaaaahhh!!:) I love seeing you around Wan..I feel great...:) More hug...:) :)

      Wonderful day my friend..:) Muaaaahhhhh!!:)

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  9. Miss LegoFebruary 8, 2012 at 7:13 AM

    Wow...it requires certain talen to do such thing Saggi, amazing! I make a bow because this can not be done for just eveyone...you are very talented!

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 7:35 AM

      Oohh.. your comment touched my heart now,mmmmm.. Thanks a lot Miss Lego..:) Love seeing u around! Hi 5!! :) smile...:)

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  10. PhilO♥February 8, 2012 at 2:23 PM

    You and Princess Fiona are just amazing! I wish I could come up with things the way the two of you do! :)

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 3:55 PM

      Thanks a lot Philo for sharing! :) Love to see you around..:) Muaaaahhh!! :)

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  11. The Muslimah CornerFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Wonderful Sagittarian! This is so touching. =) Thanks for sharing...you are good at acrostic poems hehe. ^.^ Take care,
    xxx

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 9, 2012 at 8:17 AM

      Thanks a ton Dana! :) Muaaaaaahhhhh!!! I love your Nonet too so much!!:)

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  12. cindyrinaFebruary 9, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    Wow! Endless congrats to you!!! I love that phrase 'sharing we are learning'

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:03 AM

      Thanks a lot cindyrina..:) Love to hear from you again..:) Keep smiling..:)

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  13. cookingvarietiesFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:09 AM

    hi linda, so romantic your pic.. and your poem is sooooooooooooo beautifully written, simply love the words. great and have a nice day dear..hugs

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:17 AM

      oh.. lovely rose..:) I like your new image Wan..:) Thanks for sharing..muaahhhhh!!:)

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  14. The PoetFebruary 9, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    My dear Sagittarian,
    WoW! I am so impressed with your creativity. This does not look like an easy form, but you seem to have mastered it effortlessly.
    Love the opening line "Entwine my heart don't set it free"
    Beautiful sentiments, masterfully expressed.
    You know what too...there's nothing stopping you from putting your picture in that wonderful frame (smile).
    Keep up the good work & keep on sharing & visiting!

    Love Has Seeped Into My Heart

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    1. SagittarianFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:14 PM

      Thank you so much Andy! :) I'm happy to hear that you find it impressive too.:) Oh, yes I love the opening line too..:) Oh my putting my own pix will scare you all! :) Lol.. hehehe

      Thanks a bunch! :) God bless you Andy! :)

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