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At night
Moon was so bright
Inner mind was at flight
Thinking and dreaming what is right.
~*~*~conflict~*~*~
Dear wishing you are near with me
Clear my mind with it's doubt
Fear allowed not
Teardrop
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Conflict begins and end with the mind and heart, but it doesn't mean 'NO END'
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Lovely dear....defined conflicted state very well :)
ReplyDeleteHi Valli..:) Thank you so much for nice word..:) Muaaahh!:)
DeleteVery well described Sagittarian. I love the way you have written this with last words of first four lines and first words of last four lines rhyming perfectly. Very beautiful presentation. (✿♥‿♥)
ReplyDeleteHi Sui,:) thanks a lot..:) Hope it's really beautiful,hahaha..:) Muaaaahh!! Happy to read your commment..:) And hope by this time you're feeling okay now..:) God bless you Sui..:)
DeleteHi, thanks a lot for visiting..:)
ReplyDeleteLoved this poem! This was a beautiful Butterfly Cinquain, and I liked how you inserted the word "conflict" in-between. Nice touch. :)
ReplyDeleteNow My Dear, do you have an email address? If so, could you send it my way please? Thank you. :)
Friends,
-Mara
Thank you so much Mara...:) Have a wonderful day...:) Hugs to you..:)
Deleteoften times tears and silence is our only defense when conflicts happen but time heals wounds though it will always depend on how deep it has caused..
ReplyDeletethis post didn't appear on my dashboard..visiting ;)
Hi sie..:) thanks for dropping by..:) I agree with you, tears and silence can be one of our defense mechanism to overcome conflict with life, with the help and guidance of our Lord above..:) thanks for sharing..:) Happy Sunday..:)
DeleteThe way you wrote the conflicted part was brilliant expression. Loved the concluding line of the poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Saru..:) Happy to hear from you again..:)
DeleteI have to agree with all that you have stated esp the last sentence. Suppose we go through and have to face conflict all the time in our lives.
ReplyDeleteHi Nava, thank you so much..:)Thanks for sharing comment..:) God bless..:)
DeleteSimply great,keep sharing
ReplyDeleteHi, thank you so much fro sharing...:) Have a great day!:)
DeleteVery interesting and nice poem! Thanks for sharing =)
ReplyDeleteHi, thank you Dana...:) Muaaahhh!!:) Keep smiling...:)
DeleteWell, I have to say this one was a bit confusing for me but its beauty is undeniable. Great work as always!
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Lego, I'm sorry if this one confused you,hahaha.. But thanks for appreciating it too, hahah.. Muaaaaaahh!! God bless you .. Keep smiling..:)
DeleteMy friend Sagittarian,
ReplyDeleteLove the way the poem ended. It was soft and touching to a lonely heart. Your talent is endless. Thanks for sharing.
Have great week ahead!
Thirsting For Love
Hi Andy, thank you so much for visiting..:) Wonderful day..:)
DeleteNice one Rose! :)....lovely poem! )
ReplyDeleteHello Aki...:) Hug..:) Thanks for dropping by..:) Hope you're fine now..:) Muaahhh!! Have a nice day Aki!:)
Deletethis is nice! i like it!
ReplyDeleteand nice picture too ^^
Thank you so much Maxlone...:) Hugs..:)
DeleteAww, that poem was beautiful. :) I mean that; it was really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHi Sweety,:) muaaahhh! thank you so much for coming!!:) Happy to see you around..:) Smile ..:)
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