Thursday, January 12, 2012

Light..








Rivers flow with hitch
darkness bounded life so tight
at the end is light



This is my first attempt to write haiku, and I love to share it with my friend who's so special and an inspiration when it comes to haiku, a very talented blogger. Thank you so much for being such a great friend :)

Part And Parcel Of Life...


 

 

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  1. --January 12, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    Your first haiku is beautiful! Balqis is going to be so proud of you! She's also going to be touched by your special mention of her here!

    Congrats ~ I really loved it and also the image :-) I must try a haiku soon ~ I told Balqis that it's on my list of things to do in 2012 he he!

    Hope this finds you having a wonderful day, my lovely friend ♥

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:11 AM

    I don't think I have ever tried a haiku poem, since I'm too fascinated and obsessed with rhyming prose.

    I think your first attempt is beautiful though. The words go very well with the picture that you've shown in the post.

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  3. The PoetJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:43 AM

    Hello Sagitarrian.
    Yes indeed, your first haiku is marvelous! Love your imagery.
    A lovely way to honor a good friend.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Today's your lucky day! I have a surprise for you. Please come to my blog here...

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  4. cookingvarietiesJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:35 AM

    hi sagittarisn , oops i mean Linda, great phot and haiku.
    have a nice day

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  5. The Muslimah CornerJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:36 AM

    beautitful!!

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  6. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 12:46 PM

    @Princesa Fiona,

    Thanks a lot! :) I know I don't have enough knowledge in writing haiku, but thank you so much for your nice comment! :)*sigh*blink*blink* lols..

    I'm so happy with your words.:) Hug* *Smile*:)

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  7. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    @ Mara Wildflower,

    Thank you so much for coming! Your comment is really appreciated! Try to make one, I'll love to read it too! :)*hug* smile! :)

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  8. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    @Andy,

    Thanks a lot for for coming!:) Thanks too for sharing me your award! :) Great honor for me! :) God bless you! :)

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  9. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    @Wan,

    LOL.. Thanks a lot! :) Blessed day! :)

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  10. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    @Dana,

    Thank you so much! :) And your Cinquian was really great! :) Have a nice day/evening! :)

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  11. ✿Sie✿January 12, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    ehe this in one form I couldn't do..I'm afraid to try ate..as I always say I am used to explaining myself in long sentences..hehehe..nice one ate ;)

    wahhhhh Princess Fiona not a Haiku challenge..huhuhu..

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  12. The PoetJanuary 12, 2012 at 3:07 PM

    Hello Sagittarian.
    Just stopping by to thank you for claiming your award & to wish you receive many more in the future.
    Thanks for your continuing support.
    All the best,
    Andy

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  13. AakritiJanuary 12, 2012 at 3:11 PM

    Great start my friend!
    I too adore Balqis when it comes for poetry!
    I hope see drops by this post ASAP! She'll be glad by your words! :)

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  14. ParmitaJanuary 12, 2012 at 3:19 PM

    Lovely Haiku. The tone of the image is dark but it gives off a positive vibe. May the light in your life shine brighter as the day pass by. Have a good day. ^_^

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  15. Balqis DBJJanuary 12, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    Ros, this is the first thing I have to say "WoW"! You did it so well, my friend. Even for the very first time, your words flow so beautifully! I'm happy for you. :)

    Secondly, it came as a very pleasant surprise being given the honour when mentioned here. I'm touched, honoured and grateful having a friend like you. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the kindness you bestowed on me. Knowing you had added another light in my blogosphere. :)

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  16. Balqis DBJJanuary 12, 2012 at 4:07 PM

    @ ~*Princesa Fiona*~

    Yes, it's so beautiful and you're right, I'm so proud of our friend, Ros. I'm waiting for your Haiku. :))

    *Ros, I hope you don't mind I answered Fiona here. :)

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  17. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:31 PM

    @♥Sie♥,

    Hi sis!:)thanks for coming!:) Ummm... I know you can do much better! :) Try it and it's fun trying new things! :)

    Thanks a lot sis!:) *smile*

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  18. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:35 PM

    @Andy,

    Your welcome Andy! You deserved to be followed because we gain more from you everyday! :) Thanks a lot ! :)

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  19. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    @Aakriti,

    Thanks a lot my friend! :) She's such a great one when it comes to poetry, especially haiku :)I love what I've learned from her :)

    Thanks for coming! :)

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  20. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:39 PM

    @Sui generis Writer,

    Hi Sui, :) Thanks a lot!:)Your word is another inspiration:) Thank you my friend! And i love the story at your post too! :) Am following..:) Smile!:)

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  21. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    @Balqis,

    Thank you so much for liking it,:) I really owe this from you, you know that, right? I don't know how to make one, but because of you I've learned and so happy,:) Yes!!:) And I'm so proud and grateful to have you as one of my dearest friend here,.

    thank you so much!:) *hug and kisses* Keep on smiling*

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  22. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 8:50 PM

    @Balqis,

    Oh... LOLs..:)) Ofcourse, no problem!:) I love Princesa Fiona too! :) And having you both is really a great and precious gift from God :)

    Have a wonderful evening to all of you! :)

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  23. Saru SinghalJanuary 13, 2012 at 3:47 AM

    Lovely and profound...So much of depth in it!

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  24. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 6:27 AM

    @Saru,

    Thanks a lot Saru! :) Have a wonderful day !:)*smile*

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  25. AmeliaJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:31 AM

    You did a great job. It's amazing how only a few words can have so much meaning.

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  26. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    @Missy,

    Thanks a lot Missy! :)Blessed day to you! :)

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  27. Cloe BowieJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    I never heard of a Haiku, but I just Google'd it -- very nice! (: I love the photo you chose for this, and the little poem thingy carries a lot of emotion within it; simply beautiful.

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  28. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    @Cloe,

    Hi! :) Thanks for dropping by! :) Haiku is a form of poet, in a simple way, expressing emotion in few words:)Hope you like it:)

    Have a nice day sweety! :)

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  29. MargieJanuary 13, 2012 at 1:28 PM

    Beautifully done!
    Your first haiku, wonderful!
    I love haiku but it's not my forte!

    Wishing you a joyful day!

    Margie x

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  30. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    @Margie,

    Hi! :) Thanks for dropping by! :) It's just my first time to write haiku, and I need more and more practice!lols..:) Love seeing you around! :) *smile*:)

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  31. --January 13, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    You are such a sweetheart, Sagittarian! I absolutely adore you! ♥! ♥! ♥!

    P.S. ~ If you change your commenting preference to 'posts embedded below' comment list, Blogger has a great new and easy way to respond to comments! Check it out at my blog, in case you haven't seen it yet :)

    DearBalqis ~ I'm too tangled up in Cinquain he he!

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    1. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 4:47 PM

      Yeheyy!!:) I got it!! :))*hug* muaaahhhhh!! Thanks a lot! :) You're an angel Princesa Fiona!:) *blink*blink* Smile:)

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    2. --January 14, 2012 at 11:33 AM

      Woo hoo!!! You go girl! LoL! Aww, so sweet about the 'Angel'~ thanks! Funny thing is, several people have told me this in the last week ~ soon I'll be sprouting wings lol! You're so welcome, sweetie! ♥ Muahhz!

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    3. SagittarianJanuary 14, 2012 at 9:49 PM

      LOLS.. I would love to see your sprouting wings then!!!:)) muaaahh!:) Thanks again Princesa Fiona!:) *Hug for you*

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  32. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 4:43 PM

    @~*Princesa Fiona*~,

    Hi Princesa Fiona! Thank you so much for sharing me about how can I response easily to comment! I would love to try it!:)*smile*

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  33. Prime AqueJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:50 PM

    This first haiku of yours is beautiful Sis... oh I am sorry I am a bit late here but I wont let hectic sched hinder me to have a glimpse here! Good start Sis! There must be always the sight of a rainbow after a strong rained! Hope, is always there to give us light...

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  34. SagittarianJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:16 PM

    @Prime,

    Thanks a lot my younger bro! :) I know you're too busy, but I'm so happy to see you here now! :) Hope you're just fine too! :)

    God bless Prime! :) *smile*

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